The background color of the before image does not highlight the image. The color is not complementary or analogous. The light text on the dark background feels abrupt. None of the text is centered and the right aligned text particularly disrupts the eye. The after image attempt to uses the same design elements with subtle but impactful modifications. The photo is cropped with the rule of thirds in mind. Having the focal point of the photograph off-center helps add interest and is pleasing to the eye. Adding a small white border around it also adds interest. The other colors in the design were chosen to complement the photo. The dark blue font against the light background provide a nice contrast. The alignment is corrected so the eye scans more easily across the image. The bold typeface helps to organize the information and makes it easy to interpret.